Archive for the ‘Formatting/Punctuation’ Category

re: Writing Height in Dialogue

posted 4/30/12

Dear Editor…

How should we write height in a story when the height is either in dialogue or a thought? Verbally we often say someone is five four, leaving out the word foot, but should it be written correctly either as five-foot-four or 5’4″?

Thanks,
Sue

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re: Should I Italicize Internal Dialogue in Close Third Person?

posted 8/15/11

Dear Editor…

In close third person, what are the best ways to handle internal dialog? Italics, “she thought” tags, or just let the reader figure it out?

Sincerely,
Stephanie

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re: Which Tense Is Best for Synopses?

posted 5/13/11

Dear Editor…

What tense should be used when writing a synopsis?  Does it matter what tense is used in the manuscript?

Sincerely,

Mary

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re: The Right Words Matter More Than the Right Word Count

posted 4/28/11

Dear Editor…

I am writing a YA novel, I think. (I guess it might be considered middle grade.) How many words are these novels usually? I’m past half way and mine is 14,000 words. Am I on the right track?

Sincerely,

Tina

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re: The Look of Lyrics

posted 3/8/11

Dear Editor…

When you are writing prose, and showing that someone/group/radio is singing a song, how do you format the lyrics to the song? In quotation marks? Italics? Different margins?

Thanks,

Scott

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re: Formatting IM Exchanges in a Manuscript

posted 2/22/11

Dear Editor…

I have a lot of text/IM conversations in my YA novel. Is there a way to distinguish this in my manuscript? How creative can I get?

Sincerely,
Anne

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re: Lie, Lay, and Other Grammar Issues in Dialogue

posted 12/27/10

Dear Editor…

I (now) know the difference between lie and lay, but I was wondering if this grammar rule had to be followed in dialogue? I would like my character to talk about “laying out” and tanning but trying to say it grammatically correct seems too stilted and wrong. What’s the verdict?

Sincerely,

Rachel

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re: Word Counts for Published Novels

posted 12/13/10

Dear Editor…

How do you find out how many words are in a published novel? You mentioned that Bud, Not Buddy was 52,000 words. Did you estimate from the number of pages in the book or is there somewhere we can find out that information?

Thanks,

Becky

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re: Is My MG Manuscript Too Wordy?

posted 12/9/10

Dear Editor…

Is a 50,000-word MG novel too long? If I send a query to an agent with the word-count, will they be likely to dismiss it based on the word count?

Thanks!

Heather

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re: Chapter Titles V. Chapter Numbers

posted 11/19/10

Dear Editor…

Do agents/editors like to see chapter titles? Or are just numbered chapters okay?

Sincerely,

Heather

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