re: Is First-Person Point of View Off Limits?

posted 11/15/17

Dear Editor…

I’m feeling really comfortable using first person for my novel—but “experts” say avoid it. How do you know if third person would be a better choice?

Thank you,
S. B.


Dear S. B. …

That declaration is too intransigent for me. First-person POV is perfect for some projects, and in some markets—like Young Adult fiction—it’s even the dominant choice. Gauge your target market’s expectations by reviewing its current big books. Looking at the story itself, I suspect that “comfort” you’re feeling is your gut saying, “Good choice for your info delivery needs.” First person has a sort of tunnel vision that limits readers to knowing and observing only what the narrator is privy too. You’d feel it if you were battling that limitation while trying to get readers the info they need. In that case, beta readers would complain about awkward or unnatural scenes and dialogue. That’s when I’d raise my editorial flag and say, “Try third.” I suspect you’re also comfortable with the narrating character’s voice—which is huge. If you can’t truly feel like—can’t be—that character while you’re writing, then get out of her head and try third person, which distances you from the character a bit so you can create a narrative voice that’s less her and more you.

Happy writing!
The Editor


P.S. For more on this topic, read Narrative Voice, Point of View, Publishing Biz
posted by: The Editor
under: Narrative Voice, Point of View, Publishing Biz
Comments to "re: Is First-Person Point of View Off Limits?" | Add a Comment
    1. Paula wrote (on 11/15/17 at 4:55 pm) :

      Fabulous advice. Thank you!

    2. The Editor wrote (on 11/16/17 at 9:47 am) :

      Thanks, Paula

    3. Vivian Kirkfield wrote (on 11/15/17 at 5:41 pm) :

      Perfect timing, Deborah…I just rewrote a picture book manuscript and I’m using first person and free verse. The story opened up and the connection with the mc really sparked.
      I love your feeback here!

    4. The Editor wrote (on 11/16/17 at 9:45 am) :

      Doesn’t it feel good when that happens? Best of luck with the project, Vivian!

    5. Carol Munro wrote (on 11/17/17 at 1:50 pm) :

      Great answer, Deborah! Especially re if you can’t really BE the character, get out of her head.

    6. Jennifer Raudenbush wrote (on 04/16/18 at 11:27 am) :

      Thanks, Deborah, I’m planning to try my next MG in first person 🙂

    7. The Editor wrote (on 04/16/18 at 11:32 am) :

      Excellent. Good luck and happy writing!